Why This Guy's Cover Letter is Better Than Yours

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This man's cover letter has been making the rounds across the Internet. Some sites are using it for a laugh, like Funny or Die, while others are posting it as an example of how not to write a cover letter. However, when I read this one, I couldn't help but think that this applicant clearly shows that he has a firm understanding of what a cover letter is all about. Allow me to explain:

 

The first thing I noticed was that the applicant doesn't have a strong grasp of the English language. It's easy to notice, and he freely admits it. Still, he attempts to communicate as best he can. Depending on the type of job he is looking for, his English skills may not be that important. But, let's look past his awkward sentence structure and examine the content of the letter more carefully.

 

First, he introduces himself. In his introduction, he explains that he is looking for a job and gives some indication of the job type that he would like. He handles the primary objection that any hiring manager would have by explaining that his English skills aren't so good. He goes on to say that he has a strong work ethic and had often been complimented on his hard work in the past.

 

Next, he gives some brief information about his previous work history and his experience in customer service. He mentions that he enjoys the work and that he's passionate about helping others and working with a smile. He goes on to say that he also has experience working behind the scenes in restaurants and as a waiter.

 

Finally, he does the most important part: he asks for the job. Although I'm sure that he was exaggerating by claiming that he is faster than a train, he does a great job of showing his personality and enthusiasm for the job. Although I don't think that asking for no pay until an employer agrees that he is qualified is a good idea, he does make a great sales pitch.

 

Even though this applicant doesn't completely understand English language or grammar, he does understand what an employer wants to know. When a hiring manager receives his application, they will immediately understand that this person is determined, strong, enthusiastic and willing to go above and beyond in order to do the job. As long as the job doesn't require him to be fluent in English, he would be a great candidate. Also, if there is a bear attack at the office, he's the guy you want to have around.

 

Writing a cover letter doesn't have to be difficult. Just remember what your purpose is and show an employer why they should hire you.

 

Do you usually submit a cover letter with every application or resume? Please share your thoughts in the comments.

 

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  • Eugene C
    Eugene C
    While I wouldn't send a cover letter like this out, I applaud this gentleman's chutzpah and appreciate the point you make. I normally only submit a cover letter when requested or in combination with an e-mailed copy of my resume. I now understand that employers may also look to the cover letter for insight to one's personality and character. thanks for the info.Gene
  • Sharon C
    Sharon C
    For a customer service position, I would have interviewed this person. Why, because he has wit, personality and smiles. We can't teach personality, we can teach tasks.
  • Marcos M
    Marcos M
    The cover letter should include specific examples of one's experience relevant to the position that one is applying for.Indeed format is important - introduction and specifically include the position as shown on the advertisement.Follow-up by summary of experience and conclusion paragraph requesting to personally present any and all credentials.Also include all contact information on the cover page - address, phone number in case the cover letter is separated from the resume.
  • Jane M
    Jane M
    The problem is, hiring managers, recruiters, HR personnel say different things as to what constitutes a "good" cover letter and a "good" resume.  I think it depends on what your hiring role is (whether you are the filter, or someone who will actually be working with the person in the job setting).
  •  Keep S
    Keep S
    After I read this cover letter, I had two thoughts: this candidate is a go getter, he will get the job done; and is not afraid to share his weakness. Once a person is able to pinpoint a weakness, there is room for improvement.
  • Anna Marie T
    Anna Marie T
    I think this man's cover letter is terrible and i would eliminate him from any job I would be responsible for hiring.  so, I disagree. Sorry!
  • Cheryl B
    Cheryl B
    Very good information. I am always at a loss as to what is needed on cover letter when I have put everything they need to know on my resume.Thanks for the pointers.
  • Albino D
    Albino D
    Every one is talking about the resume and cover letter writing skills but are not thinking about the process of Interviewing and selecting the perfect candidate. When I read a resume and cover letter of an applicant for most part I'm not impressed about it's content. So having a perfect writing skills does not always make you a good worker.
  • Alfred M
    Alfred M
    Your point is well taken...
  • Loretta P
    Loretta P
    This letter would stand out to me because it shows how interested he is in getting this job even if it means trying him out on the job before paying him to see if he is a fit. I thought about that one myself.
  • Kristen H
    Kristen H
    My comment would be, is it necessary for a cover letter? Does it really make a difference in which applicant will get the job?  Thank you
  • Jamie T
    Jamie T
    I think a cover letter is very important and should be sent out with every application or resume.  In fact some employers request a cover letter and inform you that your resume will not be considered without one.
  • Hercules S.
    Hercules S.
    I always include a cover letter and the first sentence of it always is "the purpose of this cover letter is to cover all the aspects that couldn't be mentioned in the resume". Then, I brag about my "bear survival" skills
  • Louis D
    Louis D
    I agree, the applicant sounds very ambitious and well intended.  Sounds like an honest and hard working individual.
  • Mike savoie
    Mike savoie
    No, this is not the way to write a cover letter, there is everything wrong  about  this letter. This fella needs help, anyone can see that this is not the way to get a job. Sorry my friend, you need help. Find someone to give you a hand and show you how to write a cover letter the right way. Come on just do it right.
  •  Brian Bielski
    Brian Bielski
    I agree. I have been a hiring manager for over 22 years and I think that too much emphasis is put on the perfection of the writing.  In reality, it is the spirit and work ethic within the person that matters most. No matter how slick the resume, it won't completely characterize the individual or even offer some idea of what kind of employee he or she might be. I have been fortunate enough to work with non-english speaking employees and I admire their work ethic and zest for what they do.
  • Baftiar K
    Baftiar K
    What a load of academic rubbish written by someone who has no idea about landing a job.
  • MortonO
    MortonO
    Thank you for use of an extreme example to make very important points about aiming communication at an expected audience.  My intent is to remember this discussion before sending future cover letters
  • JohnW.B
    JohnW.B
    This Has bad english , Bad format .  Just not good .  Yes I would do acover letter .  
  • Andrew F
    Andrew F
    I don't always submit a cover letter. Should I ? How about an article on that ?Good info, thanks.
  • michael b
    michael b
    it is the truth of that person and thank you i will do that now looking for work as a trainer assessor but very hard, i will try making this type of cover letter.

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